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Thursday, August 26, 2021

Good-bye winter

I did this because spring is almost here. It was something I could do. I enjoy doing this poem because I like spring. Why do I like spring because all the beautiful flowers came out. What is your favourite autumn, spring, winter and summer?? Mine is Summer.  
 

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4 comments:

  1. Miss Emma BargentAugust 26, 2021 at 2:00 PM

    Great work Baillie, I really enjoyed reading your Goodbye Winter poem. I liked your choice for the three colours fading into each other in the background, these colours are much warmer than the ones we think of for winter. I enjoyed your personal voice being included in the poem, as I think many people have been awoken by birds in the early hours of the morning. I too like spring because of the flowers growing and being on full show, but like you I also do love summer because of the amazing weather and ability to always be outdoors. Why is summer your favourite season?
    I'm excited to watch your blog grow and see what other activities you choose to post about.

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  2. BaillieAugust 27, 2021 at 8:05 AM

    Hi Miss Bargent it is Baillie
    Summer is my favourite season because I get to go in my pool. Yes the birds wakes me up in the early hours in the morning but I go back to sleep.
    from Baillie

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  3. Mrs HobbsAugust 27, 2021 at 11:52 AM

    Wow! Terrific poem Baillie. The bit about the bird made me laugh. We have some that walk on the roof and sound like elephants. Very annoying! But I love Spring too. You made this look so interesting and easy to read. Well done!
    - Mrs Hobbs

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  4. HollieSeptember 6, 2021 at 10:07 AM

    Hi Baillie

    its Hollie i love your poem its so nice i love how it rims maybe next time you could add some vocabulary. my favorite is summer to.

    hope to see you soon-ish ;)

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