Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Thursday, August 26, 2021
Good-bye winter
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Great work Baillie, I really enjoyed reading your Goodbye Winter poem. I liked your choice for the three colours fading into each other in the background, these colours are much warmer than the ones we think of for winter. I enjoyed your personal voice being included in the poem, as I think many people have been awoken by birds in the early hours of the morning. I too like spring because of the flowers growing and being on full show, but like you I also do love summer because of the amazing weather and ability to always be outdoors. Why is summer your favourite season?
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Wow! Terrific poem Baillie. The bit about the bird made me laugh. We have some that walk on the roof and sound like elephants. Very annoying! But I love Spring too. You made this look so interesting and easy to read. Well done!
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